it is okay.
It should either be all funny or more serious than it was.
It should have showed a larger scope of the game play other than just the beginning of the game. The review should have started at the 5:40 mark IMO.
You should use a broader scope of words , like "interface, game play, graphics - to actually talk about the game. (other than the small amount at the end)
I understand you are trying to take a certain angle with your review, but it isn't defined enough- it comes across as lazy.
It was filmed well, and I can hear you the entire time, love the song and intro.








