Make the following amendments and I'll sign
Replace
Article 1.7 –- The Wii’s lack of dvd playback is disappointing.
with
Article 1.7 –- You already have more dvd players/drives than eyeballs, there is no way another one could help
and
Article 1.5 -- The Wii’s 08 lineup was disappointing.
with
Article 1.5 -- The Wii’s 08 lineup included too many good games to name, and should not be criticised