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Okay, I took into account some of iclim's suggestions, I added in a paragraph covering squads near the end, and I added in a paragraph covering the general feel (of awesomeness) the weapons provide.

I also added in two more screens.

It's just about done, so I'm going to post this on the staff forums for editing.

Thanks for all the help guys!