makingmusic476 on 17 November 2008
K, I had a free hour here on campus, so I spent that time making minor edits and cleaning things up. I've just about finished the entire article, though I still need to add in a paragraph about the squad system. And I may add in a transition sentence at the end of my paragraph on maps.
I'm also unsure about my use of the word "exhilarating" in the first line. It may be a tad too over the top.
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