My reading comprehension is ok, but my attention spam is short. If you placed the key sentence any place else I would fall for it (sometimes I start reading from whatever word gets my attention first and all those members names got my attention). I also read fast, so the lack of paragraphs were more of a problem for me than the 100k words post.
BTW your sign is sick/disturbing/annoying/mind twisting/puke inducing/ugly. Wikipedia told me that Yaoi is more than a pretty name for Japanese women or a place where you can buy fruit.
Satan said:
"You are for ever angry, all you care about is intelligence, but I repeat again that I would give away all this superstellar life, all the ranks and honours, simply to be transformed into the soul of a merchant's wife weighing eighteen stone and set candles at God's shrine."
