zexen_lowe said:
You're right. I'll fix it |
Oh tut tut.
First, let's get rid of the parantheses and isolate the sentence for easier correcting.
Also happens when I send an e-mail, I usually spot a minor error when I'm sending it, I'll cancel the sending and correct it
First thing's first, there needs to be a period at the end of the sentence.
Also, the second comma is inappropriate since the sentence doesn't contain a subordinator or a conjuction. Add either one.
Kimi wa ne tashika ni ano toki watashi no soba ni ita
Itsudatte itsudatte itsudatte
Sugu yoko de waratteita
Nakushitemo torimodosu kimi wo
I will never leave you








