Hmm, looks like I tried to hard and missed the boat on the UK entries.
Well, I'll still submit an evaluation for what it's worth.
D-Gray - Mr. Lover
zero129
I think this is a good effort. The rhymes are catchy and whitty and I like that. But the singing leaves one wanting. Some lyrics are squeezed in just in time and it makes it feel unartistic.
The riff is catchy, and melodious, but a little low on the base.
See, there is a thing in the singing that makes it feel loose. Most of the singing feels apathetic and I think you could do better. It lacks emotion.
I'm going to give you a yes and that's because I think you can do better and I'm interested in what you can come up with to improve the singing and emotion especially.
MBP approaches pezus at the photocopier
MBP
I think this is good, and shows alot of promise. You made both characters female, one of which with a male voice, that was funny. You called him man pear big, it was funny, you then segway into a sexual fantasy out of nowhere, and then used the glorious keyphrase indubitably.
I'm sold, you have my yes, and I know you can do even better. I think you have a chance wat winning this competition MBP. Surprise me :)
