My first Vgchartz review! Please read and comment so I know how i did!

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Onyxmeth on 09 November 2009

I don't believe any game is without flaws. Your Uncharted 2 review didn't address any. Every professional review of the game I've read has addressed some. For that, it's a poor review. You should be looking at the game from all angles, not just pointing out the positives.

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hsrob said:
I honestly think it was a decent review, short and to the point with justifications for your points.

I would say that you could work a little on the presentation (as others have said), mainly spelling and capitalisation. It's not a big problem but it doesn't take long to fix and will always make your review read a little more professionally if there are no errors.

Thanks for some constructed critisism. I have seen many mistakes in my review which I have now fixed, I'll make sure to double check everything in my upcoming reviews. Thanks for feedbacK! :)

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Onyxmeth said:

I don't believe any game is without flaws. Your Uncharted 2 review didn't address any. Every professional review of the game I've read has addressed some. For that, it's a poor review. You should be looking at the game from all angles, not just pointing out the positives.

Well, I agree with you. All game is not without flaws. But, as my first review, I admit I missed a lot of content that I should have added. Also I don't think you should compare me with a professional review, being it that it was my very first game review. Thanks for feedback though :)

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