I Need help with a poem...

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rudyrsr8 on 16 July 2008

Okay I am writing a poem about a kid being forced to play sports by his father and I need to use the word beautiful/ pretty in a different way, such as sucidally beautiful or a beautiful letdown. A phrase that is not cliche'.

The main parts are about son doing everything father says then realizing what he is doing.But then has an issue with saying anything because it is his father after all.

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rudyrsr8 on 16 July 2008

Well I guess people are too busy with E3 lol, i cant blame them.

But i seriously need to finish this bc its due tomorrow and i didnt realize that till like one hour ago lol, E3 took my attention.

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