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Uhh, why is there like 2 minutes of black after the part with video and speech?

As it is, it's too vague to give feedback. Is this meant to be related to the Fight Club universe? (knowing your love for that work and this mysterious "Tyler." If it's not related, i'd change the name. If it is, you're fine.

Otherwise there's nothing really to make feedback on. Moral dilemmas are the backbone of fiction, but the execution is what separates the classics from the fodder.

I was just letting the music playout.  I was planning on putting some art work there when it was finished.

It has nothing to do with Fight Club.  Tyler is just a character, but the name could change.

I guess what Im asking is what do you think of the music, voice over, and premise.  

But i do understand its vague.  Im just not ready to talk about what its about yet as a lot could still change

I do appreciate your response though so thank you

Something like Heroes

lol i love heroes xD  But why do you say Heroes?

Here are some pointers:

1. From what was said from the video, the story does have a lot of potential.
2. The voice over was muffeled at parts and when the voice over tried to sound like it was in another state of emotion, it didn't really succeed. Overall it was the weakest part.
3. The music was placed accurately to the emotions you tried to convey.

Thank you.  Will work  on it.  Wasnt sure on the voice over myself so it was my main concern.

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