Need more paragraphs.

I try to keep it as short as possible so people will take the time to read it.  A lot of people just look at the score and nothing else so i condense things.  Thank you for the advice though :)

I meant you need to break up your sections into paragraphs.

ohhh.  I see.  i'll try and do better with that.  i try and section it off so i do skip paragraphs but I should try and do better with that to make  it easier to read.

I've always taken a big interest in segregation and the Jim Crow periods of history, so for me, the story here was hugely captivating as it was essentially as close as someone can come to experiencing a racist society (actually playing through a game as opposed to sitting back and watching a movie or book with no participation by the viewer). I probably liked the gameplay a bit more than you did as well; I thought it did an excellent job of creating a sense of running and gunning all over the map (which I enjoyed quite a bit), especially with the Skyhook mechanic.

Regardless, I applaud you for being willing to state an opinion that's somewhat contrary to the general consensus about this game.

Agree with the 8.5 and the points in the review. Personally I don't think its qualifies as a 9/10 because of too many problems.

At the same time I can understand why it would be reviewed that way, so its acceptable, but still I also consider it in the mid to high 8 range.