My son is 16 at music college in the UK and self taught mainly on guitar, but can also play other instruments.

He's composed and played the music, writen lyrics and produced his first track all on his Mac.

Maybe some of you could listen to it and provide some fedback.

Thanks.

I like it, but if it was on the radio, I would get tired of it the 5th or 6th time I heard it. It's lyrically a little repositions, Almost every line had "will I" or "I will" in it. The music itself was very good.

Also, it felt like it should have been sung in a lower key. Almost seemed like he was sining out of his nose a litte.

For a 16 year old on a Mac however, it's awesome! Great job!

Thanks for that opinion, any more?