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If you have time I want you guys to check out my interactive magazine which i done for my Design And Technology Major Project (Year 12) 
I would like if you guys to give me some feedbacks about it (positives and negatives). It doesn't need to be long, it can just be in 1 line/sentence or a score out of 10.

Thankyou very much

I only had a quick glance but it is nicely done, great work. I like how its packed full of content and details, and the links to videos and stores is a nice touch (although not everything had a link to it).

The pages were vibrant but at times felt a little cluttered (mainly in the gaming section), but I do like how there is consistency to your layout.

Other than that are minor things: I think topics with 2 pages would look better when they are side by side rather than requiring to turn the page to read the rest. Also I am not a fan of paragraphs when the words are halved and continued on in the next line. Just a little formatting thing that I know can be difficult when trying to fit everything in a small space.

Aside from that it is well done.