Okay so I fucked up BIG TIME with my gf. I don't wanna talk about it, but I didn't cheat or anything neither I fear that she will leave me or doesn't love me anymore. If we are strong and look forward everything will be fine.

This is the lyrics of a hip hop song (I will record it soon). Feel free to post everything about it. Also remember that English is not my native language, and I try to keep it "hood" but if there are big mistakes please tell me.

UPDATED WITH FINAL LYRICS

[hook]
you come to me, and i prove it, do it
and it only gets better
you dont fight it, you gotta try it, you and I
and it only gets better
you cant see it, you gotta feel it, its so real
cause it only gets better
it gets better, so much better, oh yah
and it only gets better

[verse 1]
yah, and thats my word
this is coming from my heart it's not just a verse
I know about your problems like life is cursed
let me stop this right now and put it on reverse
you a grown ass woman and I was a jerk
so forget about that shit cause it only gets worse
yah, but with me it will only get better
somethings on your my mind ill ask you whats the matter
yah, and whatever the weather
ill always keep you tight and warm like a sweater
everythings better, when we're together
and remember who's the one who only get it wetter

[hook]
you come to me, and i prove it, do it
and it only gets better
you dont fight it, you gotta try it, you and I
and it only gets better
you cant see it, you gotta feel it, its so real
cause it only gets better
it gets better, so much better, oh yeah
and it only gets better

[verse 2]
yah, and you still be my lady
youll never call me papi ill still call you baby
and lately, baby we've been fucking daily
i give it so good and you take it greatly
oh yeah, and it only gets better
if i wasn't a rapper this would be a love letter
and if I lose it I just know you will save me
if I go wild you're the one who tame me
how you make me smile, yeah you so amazing
but I ain't a psycho, you just drive me crazy
and I know you've been through too much lately
but sooner than you know I'll be the one you made me

[hook]
you come to me, and i prove it, do it
and it only gets better
you dont fight it, you gotta try it, you and I
and it only gets better
you cant see it, you gotta feel it, its so real
cause it only gets better
it gets better, so much better, oh yeah
and it only gets better

[bridge]
and if you love somebody, man tell em right now
oh yeah, you should tell em right now
if-if somebody loves you, kiss em right now
oh yeah, you should kiss em right now

[verse 3]
it might be your sister, might be your brother
it might be your girlfriend, your son or your daughter
it might be your husband, maybe your wife
or the man or the woman that gave you life
and if you love somebody, also love yourself
if you know you da shit so does some one else
and now, everybody just gather
cause with love it can only get better
haha

[hook]
you come to me, and i prove it, do it
and it only gets better
you dont fight it, you gotta try it, you and I
and it only gets better
you cant see it, you gotta feel it, its so real
cause it only gets better
it gets better, so much better, oh yeah
and it only gets better

[outro]
it's so good, this shit so good right now
and you know what? haha
it can only get better!

If you don't mind visiting myspace, you can check my old work there. YES IT IS THAT OLD, THAT'S WHY IT'S ON MYSPACE!!

https://myspace.com/mvtothap/music/songs - Little advice the "newer" the better

cringe

I just hope you're black

It's so romantic! *_*

I have an idea, record it.

That shit made ME wet. Forget your girlfriend, I want you.

My GF left me not long ago and this is the song that really expresses how i felt.i doubt i will help you though. sorry

Make her a youtube video. It doesn't even need to be a good song.

If you don't believe me, type "Cartas a Málaga" in youtube. Yeah, that's me singing a song.

Don't forget to cringe :P

This is how I feel how you felt like:

Lol thank you for your feedback. And remember, there's NO CHANCE she'll leave me, we're just both going through hard times because of shit I've done
And I'm not black, I'm swiss, so I'm technically allowed to talk like african americans


I'll keep this thread updated.