If you love your Dad, this music video will make you cry.

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Andrespetmonkey on 25 March 2013

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Andrespetmonkey said:
Lyrics seemed almost... forced? They didn't flow well, like you were forcing a rhythm on prose (my musical vocabulary is not good, so sorry if that isn't clear). A little cheesy too, but not bad.

Thanks for the comments, but which song were you talking about? The music video in the first post, or the song in the post immediately before your post?

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Makaha on 25 March 2013

I just uploaded a different version of the song four posts above this post. It's Tammy Pierce singing my song, instead of Rachel Williams in the other version. I think this verison has a little better dynamics. So as I mentioned before, I took a few lines in this song and put it in the song/music video in post #1 ("You Never Told Me")
I guess that's ripping off my own song, but I guess that's allowed? I mean, since I wrote both songs, LOL
Here's the other version:
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.php?play_file=5366_602349

It's a totally different production too, in a different key, because Rachel Williams vocal range is different from Tammy Pierce, so it had to be in a different key, so yeah, that's a lot of work....

@Andrespetmonkey

Okay.... I got it! Thanks again for the comments!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3oVRJm-RBU

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Makaha on 13 April 2013

I forgot that I had a male version of the song (but not me singing) that I ripped off myself by using a couple lines that I eventually put in the song/music video in post #1:
http://www.broadjam.com/player/player.php?play_file=5366_280717

But again, I guess it's okay and legal to rip off myself, since I wrote both songs, ha ha!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3oVRJm-RBU

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Makaha on 16 June 2013

Happy Father's Day everyone!
I miss you Dad....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3oVRJm-RBU

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Makaha on 18 March 2014

I just wrote another song about my Dad and I just uploaded the song/video to YouTube. I thought I was done writing songs about him, but I guess I wasn't. I guess he was just such a huge influence on me, Well, here's the music video, the song is called "Beautiful to Me":

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mpchHA0sRlg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3oVRJm-RBU