Shorty11857 on 27 May 2010
That was an interesting read
I took the ending to mean that
Alan by turning the lake into an ocean was able to dilute the power of the darkness (spreading it across an ocean as opposed to a small lake. With the darkness weakened Alan is now given time to try to write a way for it to be logically destroyed since he can't just destroy it
I loved the story, not quite Twin Peaks quality but I'd say if it was a tv series it'd still be well above average
