Not really, it is just that you can't really call yourself professional if you can't sustain yourself with that work. Being professional doesn't mean you are better or worse than an amateur on technique or similar, but means you can earn your keep.

The way you wrote was very far from humble actually, it was just very disrespectful.

If I was one that didn't like the elements or the story of TLOU2 the way I would phrase that (since I also write, have 3 books finished) would be "The story in TLOU2 had a line that is very different than what I aspire to do so I could use it as template of what elements I don't want to follow because I want to write about hope, luck, fortune" or whatever else you want to mean.

The way you wrote is just what I use to the first company I worked at "There I learnt all I needed to make a company thrive, by doing the opposite of what they did". Do that looks humble or disrespectful? And in this case the company had a very big revenue but still wasn`t able to pay me, they usually where down 3 months behind, so yes their management was dreadfull.

You'll likely keep looking forever, as you'll not find it.

Funny to know you aspire to write and yet don't understand why something happens when you have a cutscene displaying it directly for you.

You should really keep looking, by that point of view, you'll likely learn a lot of what to do instead of what not to do, it'll actually do you well.

Keep the good fight!

On the contrary, this whole debacle makes me more interested. As an aspiring writer, I want to dissect this story and pin-point what went wrong and learn what NOT to do when writing a story.

You were also very focused in hammering a sex scene between two people that loved each other for years and were kept apart while revenge was consuming one of them.

As a bonus unrelated to your question but very important for the mattter, you were just recommending someone to sell a game you never played and are keeping a thread of a game you don't like alive just to spread your agenda over it.

You clearly can't either comprehend what the game laid in front of your eyes neither that you have a clear set mind against it, yet you wanna criticize other people writing skills while trying to be a writer yourself, with zero respect and understanding of their work.

Nothing went wrong story wise . You think halley grossman is an amateur writer? have you seen her credentials?  I don't think you went in with the right perspective frame of mind.  Why do you think there are people who love it and hate it?  Why are there people who hated it initially, then loved it.  it's all psychological, your mind needs a bit of fine tuning in the right direction to really appreciate this game. 

No, I'm aware the game provides an explanation. The problem is I don't buy the explanation given. I don't find it believable that

"You think halley grossman is an amateur writer? have you seen her credentials?"

>Oh gee, guess that must mean she can do no wrong.

No, I'm aware the game provides an explanation. The problem is I don't buy the explanation given. I don't find it believable that

"You think halley grossman is an amateur writer? have you seen her credentials?"

>Oh gee, guess that must mean she can do no wrong.

I've been saying this for years, here too.

The reaction in the expression on Ellie's face on the PS3 was still the most impressively realist scene on any game ever until TLoU2.

It was clear Ellie never believed him, it was only natural she would confront him to know the truth and absolutely hate what he did, including lying to her.