" The game will pick up exactly where God of War II left off"
that sentence makes it sound like a preview instead of a review, you should change it to past tense.
"The story is to be told in-game as the camera pans"
"Yes, the graphics of the game must also be talked about, and they do not disappoint." is rather awkward sounding, you should probably reword it.
"Now Santa-Monica seemed to have not wanted to alter the gameplay in the God of War series." is also awkward.
As far as scoring goes, if you were one of our reviewers I would make you decrease the value to an 8.0 since that more closely matches your description of it and would ask that you add some things you didn't like about the gameplay to make the review read more like a 9.0 for gameplay. phrases like "I couldn't imagine the gameplay being any better" don't match up with a 9.0
The overall score I might make you take down a slight bit, maybe to 9.1 or 9.2 to reflect the value decrease.
The reason why i gave the gameplay a 9 was that it was superb. however, it was the same old from the other 2 games
and yeah i see what you mean, i just always thought that the scores should be close together to the final score, but i suppose they do not need to be. It does make sense since the value of the game really isn't up there....
Thank you, ill take all that into consideration for my next review ^_^