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thanks, glad you like it, well they way i image it, they one with the asteroid belt and find a guardian at the end dumping it is funny



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theprof00 said:
wait a sec, whats quierd?


i dont know how to spell it but i think is the same a gay but more polite, could it be queer?



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theprof00 said:
@radha
First of all, your da best.

Now, to address your point about the dialog:
I think they are really cool too, but it always seemed like they tried really hard to make them cool.
It's like ghosts try to hard to be cool.

Anyway, I'm thinking about doing some dialogue revision.


then try to make them look bad at the end, not make fun of the dialog in the entire comic because you are making in scence the same joke in every frame, like the one i said with the base calling in and saying there no missiles ready, you could make a very dramatic and heroic look at the beginning and then make fun of him a the end that is what puch lines are all about.



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one with a firebat ready to go out with the squad and then seen his ex has been assigned as the squad's medic



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a science vessel full of hippies, and a bunch of sergs or protoss on the ground group hugging among a dense white cloud



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I'm a Terran Starcraft player and while I rarely tech up to Ghost, I think the unit is really cool. Nothing strikes fear into your opponent more than hearing "Nuclear launch detected".

As for your comic strip, I would have the marine and firebat make fun of/blow off the ghost, make the ghost leave. Then when he's gone, you have them say something like "Ghosts are so lame" and finish the strip with "Nuclear launch detect" and the marine and firebat saying "Ohh shit!"



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have you notice what the sergs gas gathering facility has as a chimney?



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TruckOSaurus said:
I'm a Terran Starcraft player and while I rarely tech up to Ghost, I think the unit is really cool. Nothing strikes fear into your opponent more than hearing "Nuclear launch detected".

As for your comic strip, I would have the marine and firebat make fun of/blow off the ghost, make the ghost leave. Then when he's gone, you have them say something like "Ghosts are so lame" and finish the strip with "Nuclear launch detect" and the marine and firebat saying "Ohh shit!"


this is all true and funny too



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Here were some other ideas I was thinking about:

A tribute to dinosaur comics where the dinos are replaced by zergs.

A garfield tribute where something happens and it ends with "I hate mondays"

Maybe one with some redneck jokes.

One of somebody making a map.

Guy entering scene: watcha doin?
Guy at computer: After 28 hours of testing and 18 Horde flavored mountain dew gamer fuels, I have finally created the perfect hydralisk rancher map.

Guy: Oh really?
Guy at computer: Yeah, It's a perfectly symmetrical map for up to eight players, it has 100 upgrades, 15 evolutions, strategic chokepoints, easter eggs, clever jokes that pop up on screen. It is the ultimate user made map which will be downloaded thousands of times.

Guy: So it's all done then? Can I try it out?
Guy at computer: Not yet, I just have to give one of the players infinite resources.
Guy: Ah, you learn quickly padawan.
Guy at computer: I was once the apprentice, but now player 5 is the master.
Guy: Only a master of evil, douche.


I was also thinking about changing the llines in this comic to this:

first panel: Ghost exterminator changes to "EX-TERMINATOR"
second panel:
Marine 1: Ex-Terminator? Are yo supposed to be from the skynet division?
Marine 2: Nice swimsuit, at least you don't look like a splinter cell rip off anymore.
Ghost: You stim-junkies, I'm about to overload my aggression inhibitors.

third panel:
Marine 1: I think that latex suit is cutting off your circulation
Marine 2: Now he kinda looks like a Gray Fox rip-off
Ghost: That's it, you're calling down the thunder cough hack and.. now...cough

4th panel:
same, lots of breathing

5th panel:
Marine 1: And..we're going to reap the soft breeze?
Ghost: Whatever! You guys are just warhammer rip-offs anyway.
Marine 1: Lies! See, this is why they canceled starcraft ghost.
Marine 2: Ooh ! That ghost Nova is a Samus Aran rip-off, me-yow!