Hello everyone,

I joined a friend to make music. I'm still terrible at piano, but I'm slowly doing more than simply managing the growth of our channel.

Anyway, I posted this in music for a discussion. I don't want to be like youtube comments which spam their channel. I'd appreciate all feedback, whether it'd be positive or negative. Many people here have been in music for years, so chances are they can provide evaluation which is better than mine. 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zxWK2SaczSU (link)

Thanks.

Edit: 

Not sure if this will get any attention or if it'll be locked, but here's a little about our music.

It's only instrumentals. No singing or crappy remixes. We use a keyboard which is connected to either a PC or Tablet to make our music. We then use a combination of a few pieces of software to allow us to do more than just piano.

Only 720p?

The music was actually pretty good, better than what i was expecting. Also liked this one 

We don't do anything fancy, but I may start doing 1080p for Synthesia tutorials

Pretty good! I could totally see myself jumping from one platform to another and swinging a sword while this music accompanies my journey from the left to the right. Maybe the second platform is inexplicably suspended in the air and moving up and down. IDK if you were going for a video game music vibe, but that's what I got from it. Again, pretty nice.

I appreciate the feedback!

We actually would like to see our music be in a video game one day. Perhaps teaming up with an indie dev would be smart

I like the composition, but the production sounds off, like there is heavy clipping in the percussion or something. May be a tad too busy, too many instruments fighting for the same frequencies. The melody is epic though!

This piece was at a higher intensity than most of our pieces. We'll definitely watch out for that for our future videos. Thanks for the feedback

Well done.

Thanks!

The melody is pretty good, I don't know shit about music making to give any meaningful comment though, other than improve sound quality. Good luck with your project anyways, instrumental music is my favorite so I subscribed to your channel