So do you want the long version or short.
give it to me straight, doctor.
Ok First of 60fps,i don't know if the video is 60fps or is it still proccesing but your video is not 60fps now (for me) i don't mind 30fps on any game but when the game supports 60fps your video needs to be 60fps even if it is 720p.
I like that you're video is about 35 minutes.
You are stiff on cam but over time it will be natural so don't worry you were good for the first time.
And you said it yourself lightning and Sound need work.
Oh and for everyone else little spoilers but nothing major.