the_dengle said:
I don't get it. You didn't disagree that this dialogue would sound awkward. Wouldn't it flow better if changed a bit?
Written dialogue and spoken dialogue are not the same thing. That's why writing film screenplays is different from writing novels.
Zelda games are written like novels, voice-acted games are written like screenplays. They are different styles. Neither is inherently superior to the other.
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I'm not saying that one is superior, but the dubbed scripts in anime are known for their stiffness. I used that scene because it's not a natural sounding conversation, but it's delivered in a natural sounding way, just the way the scene could be. I get what you're saying, I just thing that that scene wouldn't need much tweaking.
Again, studio ghibli films have a lot of dialogue with that sort of strange synax. As long as the VA perform it naturally, it can actually add to the feel, as opposed to subtract. Or they could just make slight tweaks to the script.