Ok I'm done with the lyrics. Feedback please. Oh and the 3rd part is for everyone who reads it

Hope you enjoy.

kind of corny don't u think? buy her a rock

Maybe? I also do it for myself, I like writing lyrics and rapping (even if I'm not very good at it)

Little advice, stop cussing like a highschool dropout and focus more on the actual music then the rapping, because i listened to every one, and without exception, they were all absolutely shit (imo)

Why not do something more interesting rather than the usual "bitch" "hoe" etc shit?

Blackalicious, for example.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffrdpBACctg

What does this song tell me?, Tells me that not only does he have vocal tallent, but he isn't an idiot, either.

What do your songs tell me?, If i was honest with I'd get permabanned.

As for your situation, if you're not going to talk about it we cant help you and the thread becomes less about fixing things with her and more about yourself, which is selfish, you know what would be better to her than a "hiphop" song? not doing the same shit again, and frankly, if you feel she doesnt love you anymore then do the girl a favor and let her go,.. or you know.. continue being selfish and cling to her for your own sake.

Sure you may consider my reply to you as harsh, but hey, its better than lying and saying what you wanna hear thus preventing you from fixing your issues.

Thank you for your honest advice. As you see I'm older now and I don't know if I would say the same things as back then. On other hand, I never wanted to sound serious on my music, just being silly, funny and enjoying myself. Do you find my new lyrics als absolute shit, on the same shit level as the older stuff?

As for my situation with her. I 100% know she loves me, what I did was 100% unintentional (but horrible) and I can't really control it and promise it'll never happen again (yes it's a "brain" thing), but I know I love her even more than ever and like the song says, it will only get better with the time. I'm absoultely positive about us and our lives. Even if I suck as musician, we'll be happy together

Edit: Oh and I hope after reading this you wouldn't be banned for telling your opinion about myself anymore . I'll listen to Blackalicious later.