Smaller paragraphs and don't use that red - my eyes are blurring!
Interesting read. Most of the narrative beats, as with pretty much every vidoegame, are clearly lifted from other sources, but I felt that, similar to Red Dead Redemption, Remedy clearly put effort and care in to their own story.
The depth of effort certainly suggests they enjoyed reading/watching all their sources as much as Rockstar clearly love The Wild Bunch, Unforgiven, etc.
I do like things to end, though, so I hope they don't drag out the episodes beyond where they feel comfortable within the world they've created.
Try to be reasonable... its easier than you think...