NiKKoM on 11 January 2016
Teacher is kinda right.. You'll have to make Lilly into something meaningful.. She should be a better metaphore.. Now it looks like she died and he goes after her.. That isn't right.. Make Lilly more the anchor of the real world.. The story now doesn't even acknowledge that Lilly is actually someone in the real world
Face the future.. Gamecenter ID: nikkom_nl (oh no he didn't!!)
